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Ever since Daniela was young her family was not so wealthy. Daniela swore to herself saying she would never live like that when she was older, or to have her kids have to deal with what she had to deal with. Daniela was not picking when it came to jobs as long as she was making enough money to pay the bills and help support her family. Now Daniela is 17 and worrying on how her life will really end up. But as Daniela is walking down a strip mall an older woman with very short black hair comes up to her.
modeling?” Jennifer asks.
“Thankasks, as she looks closely at Daniela.
Daniela looking at the ground then back at Jennifer saying.” Thank you, but have not.” Says Daniela.
“Well I think you should. I am a manager of a modeling agency I could help you start off on your modeling career if you are interested??” Jennifer asks. Daniela has never thought of doing modeling. But just by the complement Jennifer gave her she wanted to do it. Daniela waited a second to make sure she really wanted to do this and said.
“I’d love to.”
After training for a couple days with Jennifer, Jennifer thinks she is ready for her first small runway show. Daniela is terrified by the idea but she is not letting anything hold her back. Jennifer is in the back of the show room with Daniela helping her with anything she needs. Many girls that are in the room have done this plenty of times before. And know what they are doing. Daniela sees how they are so good at their walks and how they are wearing there dresses. And frightens Daniela. A very tall and thin Sarah notices Daniela and knows that she is new to this. As Sarah watches Daniela stressing out she decides to talk to her.
yours?” Sarah asks.
“Daniela.” Saysis slowly walking around a sadden Daniela.table.
“Daniela.” Daniela not wanting to talk to Sarah.
“You’re new right?” Asks Sarah.Sarah, Sarah sits you came.” Says Daniela.Daniela’s head is down wishing she hadn’t told Sarah that.
“Why would tip for you. Doyou, do not trust
As Daniela and Sarah talk a little more Sarah finds out that Daniela does not like walking in high heels.
right back.” Says Sarah. JenniferSarah starts to speed walk towards the dressing room. Daniela just sits the show. And asWhen Daniela walks not see Sarah.Sarah, and wonders why.
“Oh no!” Scream’s Daniela.
of the stuck up designers asks. Jennifer’s tips. If“If something you complain about it.it.”
“Um, no everything is fine.” Daniela says. When everything was not. Daniela could not walk in high heels and someone had given her one of the biggest heels.
“Daniela, you’re on in 5mins.” The man helping all the models were to go says. Daniela is trying to walk in the high heels before she goes on. But it is too late and she is being pushed on to the stage.
fallen down. And hurt her ankle. It is
“Don’t worry Daniela, your ok.” Jennifer tries to make Daniela not feel horrible and embarrassed.
been watching the show came up
“Are you ok?” He asks.
“Yeah.” Daniela keeps her head down so the man could not wanting to talk. see her face.
“I think I know who gave you those heels, did you ever talk to a girl named Sarah today?” Asks the young man. Daniela suddenly feels stupid. Sarah even told her not to trust anyone but Daniela tells her one thing she is not good at.
trust anyone.” A depressed Daniela says.shouted, hitting her hands on her lap.
“It’s ok. one girl.” Says theThe young man.man’s thundering voice made Daniela snap out of her depression.
“Thanks, I to stay.” An happy Daniela said.now looking into the man’s eyes with courage.
As Daniela out there. She always remembers Sarah’s tip. And also if someone tries to ruin there life, just don’t quit.

wealthy. Daniela never wantedswore to herself saying she would never live like her kids to have to with. Daniela didwas not really care what she did. Aspicking when it came to jobs as long as bills and justhelp support her an older womenwoman with very short black hair comes up
“Excuse me, my name is Jennifer. I couldn’t help but notice how beautiful and tall you are. Have you ever thought about modeling?” Jennifer asks.
Says Daniela.
“Well I think you should. I am a manager of a modeling agency I could help you start off on your modeling career if you are interested??” Jennifer asks. Daniela has never thought of doing modeling. But just by the complement Jennifer gave her she wanted to do it. Daniela waited a second to make sure she really wanted to do this and said.
“I’d love to.”
times before. And know what they are doing. Daniela sees wearing there of its.dresses. And it scaresfrightens Daniela. Another girl,A very tall and thin Sarah notices
“Hey, my name is Sarah. What’s yours?” Sarah asks.
“Daniela.” Says a sadden Daniela.
“You’re new at this right?” Asks Sarah. Sarah sits next to Daniela trying to let Daniela know she is someone she can actually trust and just talk to.
“Yeah, this is my first time walking in a show. I’m really nervous. I was actually going to leave right before you came.” Says Daniela.
anyone.” Sarah says, makingsays. Making sure Daniela
As Daniela and Sarah talk a little more Sarah finds out that Daniela does not like walking in high heels.
“I’ll be right back.” Says Sarah. Jennifer just sits and tries to calm her nerves. As Jennifer comes up to Daniela, she tells her it is almost time to start the show. And as Daniela walks into the little dressing room full of girls. She does not see Sarah.
“Oh no!” ScreamsScream’s Daniela.
“Is everything ok?” One of the designers asks. Daniela remembered one of Jennifer’s tips. If something you get or you do not like, never complain about it.
biggest heels.
“Daniela, you’re on in 5mins.” The man helping all the models were to go says. Daniela is trying to walk in the high heels before she goes on. But it is too late and she is being pushed on to the stage.
“I’m not going to fall.” Daniela is telling herself. As she walks back to the entrance of the runway she feels herself falling. Then a sharp pain in her ankle. Daniela suddenly realizes she has fallen down. And hurt her ankle. It is almost like everyone in the whole room was quite and looking at her. Daniela was so embarrassed she just wanted to lay there and never get up.
“I think I know who gave you those heels, did you ever talk to a girl named Sarah today?” Asks the young man. Daniela suddenly feels stupid. Sarah even told her not to trust anyone but Daniela tells her one thing she is not good at.
“Yeah I told her I wasn’t so good at walking in high heels. You don’t know how dumb I feel right now. She even told me not to trust anyone.” A depressed Daniela says.
this to too many girls. you to. Don’t be embarrassed and I’m not going to let you stop just because of one girl.” Says the young man.
“Thanks, I really wanted to stop modeling but you convinced me to stay.” An happy Daniela said.
As Daniela gets older she becomes very successful. More then what she ever thought she would ever be. Daniela never thought she could be a model but now she is the most successful model out there.

VoyageEver since Daniela was young her family was not so wealthy. Daniela never wanted to live like that when she was older, or to have her kids to have to deal with what she had to deal with. Daniela did not really care what she did. As long as she was making enough money to pay the bills and Return
The Hero entersjust support her family. Now Daniela is 17 and worrying on how her life will really end up. But as Daniela is walking down a Magical Land where normal rules don't apply, happily explores forstrip mall an older women comes up to her.
“Excuse me, my name is Jennifer. I couldn’t help but notice how beautiful and tall you are. Have you ever thought about modeling?” Jennifer asks.
“Thank you, but I have not.” Says Daniela.
“Well I think you should. I am a while, then encountersmanager of a darker sidemodeling agency I could help you start off on your modeling career if you are interested??” Jennifer asks. Daniela has never thought of things; he conquers or escapes, indoing modeling. But just by the process overcomingcomplement Jennifer gave her she wanted to do it. Daniela waited a character flaw,second to make sure she really wanted to do this and returns home far more mature than when he left.
Thissaid.
“I’d love to.”
After training for a couple days with Jennifer, Jennifer thinks she is the backboneready for Aliceher first small runway show. Daniela is terrified by the idea but she is not letting anything hold her back. Jennifer is in Wonderland and The Labyrinth, and the framing concept for The Chronicles Of Narnia.
It's an obvious plot for dreams. Then again, it's also oneback of the most common plots usedshow room with Daniela helping her with anything she needs. Many girls that are in kiddie books, since it's an easy way for a kid to explore an immaturity (e.g., fear of the dark)room have done this plenty of times before. Daniela sees how they are so good at their walks and symbolically conquer it - secure in the knowledge that when he finally gets home, everything will be just as he left it. Nothing has changed except the kid.
And,how they are wearing there of course, there's the wondrous realm of magicits. And it scares Daniela. Another girl, Sarah notices Daniela and monstersknows that she is new to explore. It's a realm where intuition rules, rather than logic - common sense gets thrownthis. As Sarah watches Daniela stressing out the window. The Hero hasshe decides to rely on the advice of allies - unfortunately, most of them are Tricksters, and a few might even be leading him into danger. Then again, if he's a good kid, he'll probably be abletalk to follow his heart - it'll lead him into problems at times, but it'll all work out in the long run. Thisher.
“Hey, my name is the way plenty of FairyTales run.
At any rate, the story stays pretty light at first - amusing, whimsical, fun - until suddenly things takeSarah. What’s yours?” Sarah asks.
“Daniela.” Says a dark turn. The Hero has to pass some ordeals, then finally overcomes one final threat, makes a "thrilling escape from death," and returns home mature but physically unchanged.
Generally speaking (according to Booker),sadden Daniela.
“You’re new at the end of the story, a hero who has failedthis right?” Asks Sarah. Sarah sits next to join himselfDaniela trying to a suitable cross-gendered matelet Daniela know she is symbolically immature or unfinished. However,someone she can actually trust and just talk to.
“Yeah, this is my first time walking in Voyage and Return, the presence of a mate isshow. I’m really nervous. I was actually a problem, since the hero can take nothing back with him but experience - hence he mustgoing to leave his mate behind. Some stories attemptright before you came.” Says Daniela.
“Why would you leave? I heard that some girls here think you are going to avoid this problem by providingdo great. And they do not like it. I have a parallel version of the hero's love when he returns home; see The One and The Forbidden Kingdom for two film examples. (Also see the Nostalgia Critic's review of A Kid in King Arthur's Courttip for the Critic's comments onyou. Do not trust anyone.” Sarah says, making sure Daniela hears her. Daniela does not know if she should even be talking to Sarah from what she just had said.
As Daniela and Sarah talk a modern version of the Princess just appearinglittle more Sarah finds out of nowhere at the end of the movie. If you're going to provide a parallel character, at least set them up early!)
So here are the basic stepsthat Daniela does not like walking in the Voyagehigh heels.
“I’ll be right back.” Says Sarah. Jennifer just sits and Return plot:
Jeremiah and his mother have been living alone his whole life. They always were moving and he always left his friends havingtries to make new ones.calm her nerves. As Jeremiah gets older he startsJennifer comes up to notice his mom gettingDaniela, she tells her it is almost time to start the show. And as Daniela walks into the habbitlittle dressing room full of using drugs. Also coming home at late hoursgirls. She does not see Sarah.
“Oh no!” Screams Daniela.
“Is everything ok?” One of the night. All Jeremiah wants to do is get outdesigners asks. Daniela remembered one of this horrible life he is in. But it seems like every time something good happens to himJennifer’s tips. If something else has to go wrong. Jay, Jeremiah’s best friend doesyou get or you do not carelike, never complain about anything. He almost lives on the streets, but he does not mind it. After a disagreement with a group of guys Jay
“Um, no everything is suddenly dead. Jeremiah takes it hard. But he knowsfine.” Daniela says. When everything was not. Daniela could not walk in high heels and someone had given her one day he will moveof the biggest heels.
“Daniela, you’re on in 5mins.” The man helping all the models were to go says. Daniela is trying to walk in the high heels before she goes on. A couple weeks past and Jeremiah has not seen his mother. But he gets a knockit is too late and she is being pushed on to the door saying they found her dead instage.
“I’m not going to fall.” Daniela is telling herself. As she walks back to the entrance of the runway she feels herself falling. Then a car. Jeremiah’s life is crashing downsharp pain in front of him.
Anticipation Stage and 'Fall' into the Other World
The Hero's "consciousness is in some way restricted," most commonly because she's young, or becauseher ankle. Daniela suddenly realizes she has a serious flaw, or because she's "bored, or drowsy, or reckless."fallen down. And hurt her ankle. It is also commonly a blow toalmost like everyone in the head or some other injury. The character regains consciousness in an alternate reality.
Initial Fascination or Dream Stage
This new world is "puzzlingwhole room was quite and unfamiliar" - hence, cool! The hero explores.
Booker does note that, no matter how cool this whole setup might seem, "it is never a place in which they can feellooking at home."
Frustration Stage
The "mood of the adventure" startsher. Daniela was so embarrassed she just wanted to darken. It'slay there and never get up.
“Don’t worry Daniela, your ok.” Jennifer tries to make Daniela not as easy as before,feel horrible and options are disappearing; the hero's startingembarrassed.
“I’m ok. I just want to get hemmed in. "A shadow beginsbe alone.” Daniela says. And limps to intrude, which becomes increasingly alarming."
Jeremiah is noticing his mother becomethe back door. As she sits on the stairs a drug addict and wants out of this life.young man who had been watching came up to her.
“Are you ok?” He canasks.
“Yeah.” Daniela not stand how he has been living his whole life and is tryingwanting to get out.
Nightmare Stage
The shadow takes center stage, and it looks liketalk.
“I think I know who gave you those heels, did you ever talk to a girl named Sarah today?” Asks the hero is doomed!
Jeremiah’s best friend and mother has died. Now living by himself and feeling like noyoung man. Daniela suddenly feels stupid. Sarah even told her not to trust anyone but Daniela tells her one thing she is herenot good at.
“Yeah I told her I wasn’t so good at walking in high heels. You don’t know how dumb I feel right now. She even told me not to help him get through this.
Thrilling Escape and Return
Just when it looks like it's over, the herotrust anyone.” A depressed Daniela says.
“It’s ok. Everyone makes a dramatic exit back to the world she came from.
But the real question is: Was there any Character Development? "Have they been fundamentally changed, or was it all just a dream?"
Jeremiah and his long lost uncle are in the house when Jeremiah noticed his money hemistake. And Sarah has been saving his whole life has been gone. But where is his uncle now? Jeremiah hasdoing this to many girls. She knows you can go back to his poor house again. Feeling like he will never really leave this place for good. far and does not want you to.

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Voyage and Return
The Hero enters a Magical Land where normal rules don't apply, happily explores for a while, then encounters a darker side of things; he conquers or escapes, in the process overcoming a character flaw, and returns home far more mature than when he left.
Generally speaking (according to Booker), at the end of the story, a hero who has failed to join himself to a suitable cross-gendered mate is symbolically immature or unfinished. However, in Voyage and Return, the presence of a mate is actually a problem, since the hero can take nothing back with him but experience - hence he must leave his mate behind. Some stories attempt to avoid this problem by providing a parallel version of the hero's love when he returns home; see The One and The Forbidden Kingdom for two film examples. (Also see the Nostalgia Critic's review of A Kid in King Arthur's Court for the Critic's comments on a modern version of the Princess just appearing out of nowhere at the end of the movie. If you're going to provide a parallel character, at least set them up early!)
So here are the basic steps in the Voyage and Return plot:
Jeremiah and his mother have been living alone his whole life. They always were moving and he always left his friends having to make new ones. As Jeremiah gets older he starts to notice his mom getting into the habbit of using drugs. Also coming home at late hours of the night. All Jeremiah wants to do is get out of this horrible life he is in. But it seems like every time something good happens to him something else has to go wrong. Jay, Jeremiah’s best friend does not care about anything. He almost lives on the streets, but he does not mind it. After a disagreement with a group of guys Jay is suddenly dead. Jeremiah takes it hard. But he knows one day he will move on. A couple weeks past and Jeremiah has not seen his mother. But he gets a knock on the door saying they found her dead in back of a car. Jeremiah’s life is crashing down in front of him.
Anticipation Stage and 'Fall' into the Other World
The Hero's "consciousness is in some way restricted," most commonly because she's young, or because she has a serious flaw, or because she's "bored, or drowsy, or reckless." It is also commonly a blow to the head or some other injury. The character regains consciousness in an alternate reality.
Frustration Stage
The "mood of the adventure" starts to darken. It's not as easy as before, and options are disappearing; the hero's starting to get hemmed in. "A shadow begins to intrude, which becomes increasingly alarming."
Jeremiah is noticing his mother become a drug addict and wants out of this life. He can not stand how he has been living his whole life and is trying to get out.
Nightmare Stage
The shadow takes center stage, and it looks like the hero is doomed!
Jeremiah’s best friend and mother has died. Now living by himself and feeling like no one is here to help him get through this.
Thrilling Escape and Return
Just when it looks like it's over, the hero makes a dramatic exit back to the world she came from.
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Jeremiah and his long lost uncle are in the house when Jeremiah noticed his money he has been saving his whole life has been gone. But where is his uncle now? Jeremiah has to go back to his poor house again. Feeling like he will never really leave this place for good.

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Voyage and Return
The Hero enters a Magical Land where normal rules don't apply, happily explores for a while, then encounters a darker side of things; he conquers or escapes, in the process overcoming a character flaw, and returns home far more mature than when he left.
This is the backbone for Alice in Wonderland and The Labyrinth, and the framing concept for The Chronicles Of Narnia.
It's an obvious plot for dreams. Then again, it's also one of the most common plots used in kiddie books, since it's an easy way for a kid to explore an immaturity (e.g., fear of the dark) and symbolically conquer it - secure in the knowledge that when he finally gets home, everything will be just as he left it. Nothing has changed except the kid.
And, of course, there's the wondrous realm of magic and monsters to explore. It's a realm where intuition rules, rather than logic - common sense gets thrown out the window. The Hero has to rely on the advice of allies - unfortunately, most of them are Tricksters, and a few might even be leading him into danger. Then again, if he's a good kid, he'll probably be able to follow his heart - it'll lead him into problems at times, but it'll all work out in the long run. This is the way plenty of FairyTales run.
At any rate, the story stays pretty light at first - amusing, whimsical, fun - until suddenly things take a dark turn. The Hero has to pass some ordeals, then finally overcomes one final threat, makes a "thrilling escape from death," and returns home mature but physically unchanged.
Generally speaking (according to Booker), at the end of the story, a hero who has failed to join himself to a suitable cross-gendered mate is symbolically immature or unfinished. However, in Voyage and Return, the presence of a mate is actually a problem, since the hero can take nothing back with him but experience - hence he must leave his mate behind. Some stories attempt to avoid this problem by providing a parallel version of the hero's love when he returns home; see The One and The Forbidden Kingdom for two film examples. (Also see the Nostalgia Critic's review of A Kid in King Arthur's Court for the Critic's comments on a modern version of the Princess just appearing out of nowhere at the end of the movie. If you're going to provide a parallel character, at least set them up early!)
So here are the basic steps in the Voyage and Return plot:
Anticipation Stage and 'Fall' into the Other World
The Hero's "consciousness is in some way restricted," most commonly because she's young, or because she has a serious flaw, or because she's "bored, or drowsy, or reckless." It is also commonly a blow to the head or some other injury. The character regains consciousness in an alternate reality.
Initial Fascination or Dream Stage
This new world is "puzzling and unfamiliar" - hence, cool! The hero explores.
Booker does note that, no matter how cool this whole setup might seem, "it is never a place in which they can feel at home."
Frustration Stage
The "mood of the adventure" starts to darken. It's not as easy as before, and options are disappearing; the hero's starting to get hemmed in. "A shadow begins to intrude, which becomes increasingly alarming."
Nightmare Stage
The shadow takes center stage, and it looks like the hero is doomed!
Thrilling Escape and Return
Just when it looks like it's over, the hero makes a dramatic exit back to the world she came from.
But the real question is: Was there any Character Development? "Have they been fundamentally changed, or was it all just a dream?"
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Avery hot July day, a young women named Jen and man named Robert. Are coming out of a car to see their new home.
“This seems nice.” Says Jen.They are moving to Puerto Rico. For business purposes. A very young Mariana gets out the car also.
“How long are we going to be here?” Mariana asks.
“I’m not sure yet.” Robert says to Mariana. Mariana and her mother knew her dad was a business man. But they did not know exactly what he did.
“When will the body guard be coming?” says Mariana’s mom to her father.
“He should be coming tomorrow before Mariana goes to that summer program.” Says Mariana’s dad.
The next day, Mariana has a fan to her face when she hears her mom call her.
“Mariana, I would like you to meet someone.” Jen yells.
“Hello, my name is Teddy.” A very tall, brown skin man, with a smooth voice says.
“ Mariana, this place is not so safe for you to be running around alone, so Teddy is here to make sure you are safe.” Says Jen. Mariana is ok with it. As they go to Mariana’s summer program Teddy wants to talk to Mariana.
“ I just want to tell you this now, just incase something will happen you will know what to do.” Teddy tells Mariana. “ if I’m ever hurt and you are in danger I want you to run. Don’t stay back and wait for me just keep running.” Says Teddy. “ Teddy, where are you from?” Mariana asks.
“ I’m am from California, but I’m always moving around because of my job. I haven’t been to California in ages.” Teddy tells Mariana. As they get to a very poor school Teddy notices something odd. Many older guys are around, they do not look like they have anything to do around here. Teddy walks Mariana to the school and makes sure she gets in safe. Then Teddy waits for a little bit.
As Teddy gets into his car he can see Mariana talking to some of the children. Then he hears.
“ Where’s the girl!” Screams one of the guys to Teddy. As the others pull him out of the car. Teddy fights them off until one shoots him in both of his legs. As he lays there helpless all he is thinking about is getting Mariana. Teddy crawls to his car, but he sees everyone running. Mariana is playing hide and seek with her friends. She is it. Mariana doesn’t know what’s going on because she is covering her eyes behind a tree. But she is soon picked up and thrown in a car. As people rush to Teddy, he is asking where Mariana is. But no one is answering him. He then notices they have her.
As teddy is resting in a spare room in Mariana’s house Jen is going crazy. Calling everyone and crying. Teddy is determine to recover fast and get Mariana back.
“How are you doing Teddy?” asks Jen.
“ I’m fine, the doctor says im a qwick healer.” Replies Teddy.
“That’s great.” Says Jen. As Jen looks across them room Teddy feels horrible.
“ I’ll find Mariana.” Says Teddy. Teddy is now sitting up. And then tries to walk. He can only limp around. Teddy leaves the room to make a call. He calls the search team and is talking to a lady.
“Hello senora Maddy, how is the search going? Do they have any leads?” Teddy asks.
“ Hello Teddy, well all we know that in Puerto Rico many children are taken everyday. But one of the biggest cases are all from one guy. No one knows who he is exactly, but many kids are taken by him. And we think Mariana is one of them.” Says maddy.
“ Tell me everything you know about this guy.” Demands Teddy.
“ Well he is known as “silent.” And he has many people working for him.” Maddy says.
“ how would I get a hold of him or someone that knows him?” Asks Teddy. But then the line is lost. As Teddy sits down he gets another call. From a number he does not know. So as he answers a deep voice says “ we have the girl.” Teddy sits and stays quite.
“ who is this?” Teddy demands.
“ I have the girl, and if you want her back you will do as is say.” The voice says.
“ how do I know you have the right girl?” Teddy asks.
“ if you do what I say I will give you clues it is her.” The voice says.
“ Alright.” Teddy taking no changes to lose Mariana.
“ good, now a 7:30 tonight I want you to go down town. Into a parking lot circle 5 times then leave 1,000 dollars in the abandon car.” Says the voice.
“ how am I going to get 1,000 dollars by 7?” Teddy asks.
“ how am I suppose to know.” The voice says. Then he hangs up. Teddy goes to the police department and talks to senora Maddy. She tells Teddy they can get the $1,000. So now Teddy is ready to go the the parking lot. As Teddy arrives at the parking lot he does not look around he does what he needs to do and leaves. Then Teddy gets a call.
“ you want your first clue?” asks the voice.
“ yes, tell her where I am orignialy from.” Teddy says.
“…California.” Says the voice. Teddy just sits in his car saying nothing.
“If you do as I say she will be safe.” Silent says.
Teddy is now doing many things for “silent.” And still he is not close until he knows what is important to silent. Teddy goes to a very poor part of the town and sneaks into a house. He notices a woman with 4 kids with her. As Teddy holds them hostage he notices a man who is silent’s cousin. And ties him up. About an hour later silent calls.
“ now I have your cousin, and if you don’t tell me where Mariana is I will toured him.” teddy says. Silent is now silent and does not know what to say.
“ hello! I know you heard me. Where is she?” Teddy yells.
“ I have a deal to make with you.” Silent says.
“ok what is it?” Teddy asks.
“ if you give me my cousin I will give you the girl. But I want you also.” Silent says.
“ ..ok. when will this happen?” teddy asks.
“tomorrow, by the abandon factory.” Silent says.
Teddy is at the factory with silent’s cousin. He calls Mariana’s mom and tells her to come. As teddy gets out the car Mariana’s mom is pulling up next to him.
“I am going to go and get Mariana. I want you to stay here and let him go when you see Mariana.” Teddy says. As teddy starts to walk he thinks about Mariana. He sees a guy open the door and let out Mariana. She notices Teddy and runs to him. Teddy tells her, her mom is waiting for her over there. But she asks where is Teddy going.
“I’m finally going hime.”

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Avery hot July day, a young women named Jen and man named Robert. Are coming out of a car to see their new home.
“This seems nice.” Says Jen.They are moving to Puerto Rico. For business purposes. A very young Mariana gets out the car also.
“How long are we going to be here?” Mariana asks.
“I’m not sure yet.” Robert says to Mariana. Mariana and her mother knew her dad was a business man. But they did not know exactly what he did.
“When will the body guard be coming?” says Mariana’s mom to her father.
“He should be coming tomorrow before Mariana goes to that summer program.” Says Mariana’s dad.
The next day, Mariana has a fan to her face when she hears her mom call her.
“Mariana, I would like you to meet someone.” Jen yells.
“Hello, my name is Teddy.” A very tall, brown skin man, with a smooth voice says.
“ Mariana, this place is not so safe for you to be running around alone, so Teddy is here to make sure you are safe.” Says Jen. Mariana is ok with it. As they go to Mariana’s summer program Teddy wants to talk to Mariana.
“ I just want to tell you this now, just incase something will happen you will know what to do.” Teddy tells Mariana. “ if I’m ever hurt and you are in danger I want you to run. Don’t stay back and wait for me just keep running.” Says Teddy. “ Teddy, where are you from?” Mariana asks.
“ I’m am from California, but I’m always moving around because of my job. I haven’t been to California in ages.” Teddy tells Mariana. As they get to a very poor school Teddy notices something odd. Many older guys are around, they do not look like they have anything to do around here. Teddy walks Mariana to the school and makes sure she gets in safe. Then Teddy waits for a little bit.
As Teddy gets into his car he can see Mariana talking to some of the children. Then he hears.
“ Where’s the girl!” Screams one of the guys to Teddy. As the others pull him out of the car. Teddy fights them off until one shoots him in both of his legs. As he lays there helpless all he is thinking about is getting Mariana. Teddy crawls to his car, but he sees everyone running. Mariana is playing hide and seek with her friends. She is it. Mariana doesn’t know what’s going on because she is covering her eyes behind a tree. But she is soon picked up and thrown in a car. As people rush to Teddy, he is asking where Mariana is. But no one is answering him. He then notices they have her.
As teddy is resting in a spare room in Mariana’s house Jen is going crazy. Calling everyone and crying. Teddy is determine to recover fast and get Mariana back.
“How are you doing Teddy?” asks Jen.
“ I’m fine, the doctor says im a qwick healer.” Replies Teddy.
“That’s great.” Says Jen. As Jen looks across them room Teddy feels horrible.
“ I’ll find Mariana.” Says Teddy. Teddy is now sitting up. And then tries to walk. He can only limp around. Teddy leaves the room to make a call. He calls the search team and is talking to a lady.
“Hello senora Maddy, how is the search going? Do they have any leads?” Teddy asks.
“ Hello Teddy, well all we know that in Puerto Rico many children are taken everyday. But one of the biggest cases are all from one guy. No one knows who he is exactly, but many kids are taken by him. And we think Mariana is one of them.” Says maddy.
“ Tell me everything you know about this guy.” Demands Teddy.
“ Well he is known as “silent.” And he has many people working for him.” Maddy says.
“ how would I get a hold of him or someone that knows him?” Asks Teddy. But then the line is lost. As Teddy sits down he gets another call. From a number he does not know. So as he answers a deep voice says “ we have the girl.” Teddy sits and stays quite.
“ who is this?” Teddy demands.
“ I have the girl, and if you want her back you will do as is say.” The voice says.
“ how do I know you have the right girl?” Teddy asks.
“ if you do what I say I will give you clues it is her.” The voice says.
“ Alright.” Teddy taking no changes to lose Mariana.
“ good, now a 7:30 tonight I want you to go down town. Into a parking lot circle 5 times then leave 1,000 dollars in the abandon car.” Says the voice.
“ how am I going to get 1,000 dollars by 7?” Teddy asks.
“ how am I suppose to know.” The voice says. Then he hangs up. Teddy goes to the police department and talks to senora Maddy. She tells Teddy they can get the $1,000. So now Teddy is ready to go the the parking lot. As Teddy arrives at the parking lot he does not look around he does what he needs to do and leaves. Then Teddy gets a call.
“ you want your first clue?” asks the voice.
“ yes, tell her where I am orignialy from.” Teddy says.
“…California.” Says the voice. Teddy just sits in his car saying nothing.
“If you do as I say she will be safe.” Silent says.
Teddy is now doing many things for “silent.” And still he is not close until he knows what is important to silent. Teddy goes to a very poor part of the town and sneaks into a house. He notices a woman with 4 kids with her. As Teddy holds them hostage he notices a man who is silent’s cousin. And ties him up. About an hour later silent calls.
“ now I have your cousin, and if you don’t tell me where Mariana is I will toured him.” teddy says. Silent is now silent and does not know what to say.
“ hello! I know you heard me. Where is she?” Teddy yells.
“ I have a deal to make with you.” Silent says.
“ok what is it?” Teddy asks.
“ if you give me my cousin I will give you the girl. But I want you also.” Silent says.
“ ..ok. when will this happen?” teddy asks.
“tomorrow, by the abandon factory.” Silent says.
Teddy is at the factory with silent’s cousin. He calls Mariana’s mom and tells her to come. As teddy gets out the car Mariana’s mom is pulling up next to him.
“I am going to go and get Mariana. I want you to stay here and let him go when you see Mariana.” Teddy says. As teddy starts to walk he thinks about Mariana. He sees a guy open the door and let out Mariana. She notices Teddy and runs to him. Teddy tells her, her mom is waiting for her over there. But she asks where is Teddy going.
“I’m finally going hime.”

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Avery hot July day, a young women named Jen and man named Robert. Are coming out of a car to see their new home.
“This seems nice.” Says Jen.They are moving to Puerto Rico. For business purposes. A very young Mariana gets out the car also.
“How long are we going to be here?” Mariana asks.
“I’m not sure yet.” Robert says to Mariana. Mariana and her mother knew her dad was a business man. But they did not know exactly what he did.
“When will the body guard be coming?” says Mariana’s mom to her father.
“He should be coming tomorrow before Mariana goes to that summer program.” Says Mariana’s dad.
The next day, Mariana has a fan to her face when she hears her mom call her.
“Mariana, I would like you to meet someone.” Jen yells.
“Hello, my name is Teddy.” A very tall, brown skin man, with a smooth voice says.
“ Mariana, this place is not so safe for you to be running around alone, so Teddy is here to make sure you are safe.” Says Jen.

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Overcoming the Monster
A hero learns ofAvery hot July day, a great evil overshadowing the land (sometimes not his own land). He gets special equipment and/or weapons, heads out, and defeats the evil, freeing the land.
The first known story, //The Epic Of Gilgamesh//, is set in this form. So is the first James Bond movie,young women named Jen and man named Robert. Are coming out of course a wealth of stories in between. Alsocar to see their new home.
“This seems nice.” Says Jen.They are moving to Puerto Rico. For business purposes. A very young Mariana gets out the base for many video games, e.g. any //Super Mario// jump'n'run. Here's the gist of how the stages run:
Anticipation Stage and Call
The fearsome Monster makes his presence known, often from "a great distance" although occasionally more up close and personal. Its nature is base and vile, a picture of the dark side of humanity. To drive this home, it is "highly alarming in its appearance and behaviour"... treacherous and deadly, ugly or ill-formed, and, often, "something about its nature [is] mysterious... hardcar also.
“How long are we going to define" (elusive, shapeless, nightmarish).
The Monster may be humanoid, animal, or a combination of both (e.g., the Minotaur). If it's humanoid, it will still have bestial qualities, as well as some deformity or abnormality that shows it ashere?” Mariana asks.
“I’m not quite human (abnormal size counts). If it's physically an animal, it will be "invested with attributes no animal in nature would possess, such as a peculiar cunning or malevolence" - thus partly human. As for combinations: We tendsure yet.” Robert says to imagine creatures composed of things we know, such as the dragon with "a reptilian body, a bat's wingsMariana. Mariana and the head ofher mother knew her dad was a giant toad or lizard." (Hey, even when we craft Cosmic Horrors we give them a squid's tentacles, right?)
Duringbusiness man. But they did not know exactly what he did.
“When will the course of the story, the Monster may take on any of three basic roles:
Predator: Prowls around, tryingbody guard be coming?” says Mariana’s mom to find victims. //The Devilher father.
“He should be coming tomorrow before Mariana goes about liketo that summer program.” Says Mariana’s dad.
The next day, Mariana has a roaring lion, seeking whom he may devour.//
Holdfast: Zealously guards a Treasure or a Princess. Very suspicious of any strangers, but may be sleepingfan to her face when the Hero comes to claim it.
Avenger: "When its guardianship is in any way challenged," the Monster rushes out to find and destroy those who've taken its Treasure.
All three are found in the pattern story //Jack And The Beanstalk//: First it's "Fee fi fo fum,she hears her mom call her.
“Mariana, I smell the blood of an Englishman," then it's the sleeping giant guarding his treasures, and finally it's the angry giant pursuing Jack across the clouds and down the beanstalk.
Anyway. So the Monster poses a grave threat. Who's goingwould like you to stop him? The Hero, who receives his Call To Adventure. If he's smart, he heads out immediately (since The Call Knows Where You Live!) - and after all, who elsemeet someone.” Jen yells.
“Hello, my name is gonna kill that thing?
2-3 sentences that summarize the stage
Dream Stage
The Hero prepares for battle while moving closer to the Monster (either he's heading out, or the Monster's approaching his home). But the danger is still "comfortably remote" and everything seems to be working out okay.
2-3 sentences
Frustration Stage
The Monster shows up and shows off, "in all his awesome power." There's no contest here: No way the Hero can beatTeddy.” A very tall, brown skin man, with a thingsmooth voice says.
“ Mariana, this strong! At this point, the Hero seems to be "slipping into the monster's power" and "may even fall helplessly into the monster's clutches."
2-3 sentences
Nightmare Stage
Timeplace is not so safe for the climactic battle. The odds seemyou to be against our Hero even surviving this fight. But, of course, we know how these things turn out, right?
2-3 sentence
The Thrilling Escape from Death, and Death of the Monster
The Monster's powerrunning around alone, so Teddy is broken, and it dies; the people who had been under its powerhere to make sure you are liberated; the Hero emerges victorious.
To symbolically complete the tale, the Hero receives three things:
A treasure (an inheritance counts)
A kingdom (something to rule over, e.g., a cook hero might get his own restaurant)
A Princess (or, in the case of a female Hero, a Prince - either way, it's the ultimate mate, the Hero's other half) 2-3 sentences
And they all lived Happily Ever After.
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Frustration Stage
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Nightmare Stage
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The Monster's power is by Piggy’s glasses. Ralphbroken, and Piggy go to Jack’s side ofit dies; the people who had been under its power are liberated; the Hero emerges victorious.
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And they are now saved. all lived Happily Ever After.
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